Why Everything Matters in a Novel

When potential clients approach me it is often because they are looking for someone to help them write their memoir or autobiography, however, most don’t realize that I have written over fifty novels as a ghostwriter, collaborator, and as my own through a pen-name.

While most writers focus on perspective, context, and build-up one often forgotten detail that is equally important is how much even the smallest details matter in a novel. So, whether you write your own novel, or hire me to edit, coach, or help write your novel keep your eyes out for those small details that seemingly vanish into the world you’re creating.

I once had a colleague ask me to read a novel he was writing. For a first draft, it was quite good. Most writers out there know what I mean. First drafts have the unsavory reputation for being miserable. One wonders how they so often turn into a beautiful book.

One note I had for him was all the unnecessary information he’d thrown in the book. All writers are guilty of it. We all want to show off how brilliant we are with our knowledge of useless facts — especially to the reader.

For a new writer, this can be a punch to the gut. What do you mean people don’t want to know the Ozark Mountains are the third oldest mountain range in the world? A quick, unnecessary fact: the one about the Ozarks was mine 15 years ago. Trimming down is easily one of the most difficult tasks any writer faces. However, with a few clues on what you should keep and what you shouldn’t, you should be on your way to trimming that 300,000-word epic about a little girl, her dog, and a magic rock into something more readable.

Keep fun facts to a minimum

Description is good, as long as it continues to move the story forward. Fun facts are not always in this category. In fact, I’ll go as far as saying, no fun facts should be in your book—ever. Show us what the person looks like through narrative and dialogue. And guess what? You do not have to vomit description all over the readers. Some of the best descriptors are those that go unnoticed like gently dropped bread crumbs along the journey.

Everything should be done with reason

Your character should not pick up a book, to simply pick it up and then put it down. Your character should have an explicit meaning in everything they do. For example, if your character picks up a book, they sure better be using that book for something in the short future. Is your character going to knock someone over the head with it to escape from a tower? Will they write their phone number in it, and hand the book to a lover? Will they pen a secret code on page 201 that unlocks a safe? If your character is not doing something to move the story forward, then they should not do it.

Flashbacks need to have purpose

If your character has a flashback, the flashback should make sense to the story, and be used in the story. If you are talking about your grandfather and use a flashback to say how he always turns the TV off every time someone in the room talks, then that should have meaning in the story. While it may be a good description of your grandfather’s dislike of people talking during the Cubs game, unless he does this in your story, and it is a big part of your grandfather’s role in the story, it would be best to leave it out.

Don’t expect the reader to just “get it.”

Don’t allude to things and think you are mysterious. A mystery has well-placed clues, often placed well enough that you didn’t even know the clue was there. Leaving the reader with a statement such as, “My buddy Richie left town without speaking a word…I wouldn’t find out until many years later why he did.” If you say this, you better mention why Richie left town pretty darn quick. If you don’t your reader will start to try and figure it out, and what they imagine will likely be crazier than what you have happen, which will lead to disappointment. The other problem with these statements is that there is potential you, your editor, and publisher miss the fact that you never actually did tell the reader why Richie left town. That’s alright, readers will catch it for you, they always do… and after your book is published.

Just remember, even the smallest detail has to push that story forward. Don’t try to show off how many facts you memorized in college, or how good you are at Trivial Pursuit. The reader just wants a good story.

If you are looking for a writer to help with your book or other writing/editing project please contact me to discuss. You can find my rates and types of projects I work on here.

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